~? Pok?mon FR/LG: Continued ?~ [PG-13]

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I liked your comics!!They were so funny!
 
Thank you all for your comments ^^ It brightened up my day

I've got Chapter 3 part 1 finished. I'm about to put it up. Took quite a while longer to do than my other ones. It's not all that funny either, just to tell you.

Plus, you may be wondering why the font is a little funny on Chapter 3 part one, well I had to try and make the font a little smaller for the Status Bars, so that explains why it's a bit dodgy. Plus you may also be wondering why at the last little image, Green and Shiftry are in the wrong positions, probably because no Back Sprite for Green exists, plus I wish not to make one myself, you'd think I'd actually even bother? Lol. So I just had to switch the positions around.

Also if you noticed, Suicune's surf image isn't exactly a 'surf image' I couldn't insert a proper Surf attack and I couldn't find one on the net, so I had to make it myself.
 
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these are awesome I can't wait for part two of chapter 3
 
Signomi said:
Plus you may also be wondering why at the last little image, Green and Shiftry are in the wrong positions, probably because no Back Sprite for Green exists, plus I wish not to make one myself, you'd think I'd actually even bother? Lol. So I just had to switch the positions around.
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It kind of make sence of putting Green in the wrong position. Blue said "Behind you" and when Green looked back, you view Green as Shiftry. I guess xD;;

Anyways, its great so far! Can't wait for Chap. 3 Part 2! =3
 
Lol. Sure, let's go with that XD Yup, just done up Blue's sprite. NOW I am going to do part 3 ^_^; -bounces off to paint...again-

EDIT: Part 2 is done ^_^; Took me some time to do but yeah.
 
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Signomi said:
Lol. Sure, let's go with that XD Yup, just done up Blue's sprite. NOW I am going to do part 3 ^_^; -bounces off to paint...again-

EDIT: Part 2 is done ^_^; Took me some time to do but yeah.
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Lol xD

It's getting interesting so far =D
Hmm I'm kind of confused why the high leveled pokemon in the wild though xD
*is now sitting and waiting for Ch. 3 Part 3* xD
 
Well, as the story progresses, you'll find out Cookie dearie =3 I'll start on Part 3 tomorrow/ Right now...eh, I'm just gazing at the new cover. It's not all that good I know..but if you ask me, it was better than the other one o_o

EDIT- Actually, Chapter 4 part 1 is done =3 and I actually bothered to make Green's backsprite o.o; I must be really mad.....
 
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not bad man i give it a B+ and trust me I?ve probably read about 100 sprite comics yours is nice piece work
 
What can i say... AWESOME!! ^__^;;
i wrote a couple of fanfics but none as good as urs
keep up da good work
 
fantastic comic could use a bit more humour 9/10
 
datriot: Thank you ^^
Clow: Wow, I'm honoured, thank you ^__~
squall: Woah there partner, going out with each other? =3 I haven't decided on romance yet x3 should I have romance?
Kamahi: Thank you! ^o^
Cookie: Well, I'm going to make it exciting as possible ^_^
jambo: Well, thank you ^^ But Humour is only the side Genr? of this comic. Whole, it's Adventure/Humour ^__~

Anyway, I've added a character section and a plot section, now you know where I shall be going with this comic. I've also made Chapter 4 part 2. So stay tuned ^_~;;;
 
Ha-ha. x3


I like your comic. I can't edit sprites like you. ^^; I like that Green and Blue are in this. <3


The only thing I'm not wild about is that Green seems really OOC. o.o It looks like it's more of Shigeru's personality and not Greens. ^^;


But overall I like it. x3 Can't wait until you post more~


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And yes, you should add romance! >D
 
Signomi said:
Cookie: Well, I'm going to make it exciting as possible ^_^

Anyway, I've added a character section and a plot section, now you know where I shall be going with this comic. I've also made Chapter 4 part 2. So stay tuned ^_~;;;
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Chapter 4 Part 2 was great! It kept me thinking. =D zD
For some reason, the last part of it reminded me of some tower you can find in Johto xD

The intro revamp looks spiffy! =3 It's all neat! ^^
 
I read this at 1:30 in the morning. I'll have to read it when I'm sane and don't have allerygy issues, but from what I can see...


This is horribly funny... I chuckled, snickered, and giggled, and I normally don't! Green is... Green XD
 
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