PokeCommunity Island

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Happy Birthday Jordan!
He was encompassed by all his best friends. Friends he met from so many different places, a good amount coming from PC. He couldn't of been happier if he tried.

"Uh....thanks you guys...." he groaned, as he rolled over.
"...huh?"
He woke with a start, pulling himself up with his arms to see the sandy beach that surrounded him. He surveyed his surroundings, and sighed, crushed to see that his dream was just a figment of his imagination. He struggled to get himself up, holding onto left arm.
"Hey, Mr. Sailor. Do you know where we are?
.......Mr. Sailor?"
He looked frantically for the old man, but to no avail. He was even more crushed then before, now that he knew he was all alone.
"Well, welcome to your new home Jordan!" He said, as a gust of wind flew by, shoving sand into his eyes.
 
What's with the idleness? Tom thought after another 5 minutes along the beach. Incredible. What is happening? Did I already die or something? Am I still dreaming? Is that why I see no one?
He focused on trying to hear for human voices, or anything that doesn't sound natural. God... God? he said over and over again in his heart. Turned his head to check if anyone was behind him.
Tell me I'm dreaming... how there be no survivers here?
Tom closed his eyes, stopped walking, and began to sob...
 
"Nah, it doesn't I think it looks great. Some people think something looks bad and opaque, but it most of the time it turns out to be very beautiful."

Zeth followed behind her, wondering where Kayleigh was going.

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
Chrystie awoke among a blinding glare of sunlight in her eyes--simultaneously hacking up sand. "BLLLLLLECH!" She coughed up more sand and shielded her eyes as much as she could from the poignant sunlight when she glanced around for other signs of life; but, another thought popped up in her mind.

She gasped, "I have seen the light...! I KNEW KAYLEIGH WAS WRONG! I'm dead, goshdarn it! My whole life has washed away with the ocean; my opportunities are gone with the wind! I HAVE SOME UNFINISHED BUSINESS TO TAKE CARE OF--" Chrystie cut off her trail of thought and wandered into another, "...but where is she...?" She silenced for a moment to take it all in while taking her awkward shoes off, then standing up. She sighed, "I have to use the bathroom. Now what?" She folded her arms, staring into waves of the ocean.
 
"Well, I do try to take care of it..." Kayleigh replied, staring at the ground. That's all that she could do. She was blushing too hard to want to look anywhere else. Too bad though, because that was a mistake.

"Oww!!!!" she cried, falling backwards. "I guess I should have been... looking." She fell back, fainted, from the impact of walking into one of the palm trees surrounding the area.
 
As Kayleigh fell back, Zeth was quick to help her up, she had ran into the tree pretty hard.

"Are you ok? Your face looks kind of red, you must of hit that tree pretty hard..."

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
Kayleigh opened her eyes and blinked quickly.

"Ehh, this is just not our day," she muttered, standing up.
"Well, I'm alright. It doesn't really hurt. Let's just get back to where Batesy is. That's where all of the bandages are."
She smiled sheepishly and began to walk off again, red with embarrassment.
 
"Ok, let's go, I'm in need of some bandages, I need to clean these cuts out."

Zeth walked beside her this time, so neither of them would trip or be in any great danger. He wondered how much longer they had to wlk. His stomach gave a small grumble.

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
Jordan, walking with arms hands behind his back, continued along the beach, once again surveying the green-filled area that he would now call home.
"Seeing as how I'm all alone, and all hope is lost, what better time to start my vacation! After all, I did want to live on paradise. What better time to start!"
He grabbed a pile of rocks and formed them into a crudely shaped chair, flipped off his sandals, sat down pulled his now broken pair of sunglasses over his eyes.
"Yeah, this is paradise alright!"
To his dismay, his glasses fell off his face into his lap.
".....yup, home sweet home......"
 
Kayleigh nodded and continued walking. After a few minutes, they reached a clearing.
"Finally!" she said, listening to the waves crash up against the beach. She looked around for her bag, and finally spotted it sitting under a palm tree.
"Okay..." she said to herself, walking towards it. She sat down under the tree and opened it, pulling out a small First Aid kit. She took out several bandages, packets, and containers, and set them on the sand.
"Take your pick! I'll take what's left, because mine isn't very bad. Sorry that they're still a little wet, too. Just save some for later, incase we have any more accidents. ...I don't know when, if ever, we'll be going home."
 
"Ok, I guess I'll just take a bandage or two, I don't have any really serious cuts."

After cleaning out his wounds, Zeth placed a bandage over the serious ones, and looked around at the desolate paradise.

"Well, what are we to do next?"

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
Tom wiped his tears, without realizing how dirty his hands were, and then he decided to get out of the extreme sunlight, or at least, suffer less of it. Too humid. He moved quietly into the forest. Though he still had some hope, he couldn't help but feel defeated and stupid.
Then... He saw a guy and a girl walking beside each other, they were heading towards the beach. They looked real. But Tom for some reason was unmoved, he felt disbelief and too much anger to see. "What, God? Ha ha, are they suppose to be Adam and Eve? Some new Adam and Eve you're showing me? It's Adam and Eve number two! Yupie!" He said to nothing in particular. His crazy idea that he was dead or sleeping still surfaced again. "So, where am I in this? Do I belong? Should I think, of course, or not really?" He continued to talk spontaneously to anything. Then he turned back to those two and shouted "Hi!!!!" Expecting nothing. "What's your name!?!? You!?!"
 
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Man... am I getting behind or what? XD 22sa requested a "PC Island" pic, so I guess I need to make one.

Ah, here we go:
[PokeCommunity.com] PokeCommunity Island


It might look a bit plain, but I was trying to make it as fast as I could. The green is forest, and the color around the green is sand.

(now to the story)
Keith's body began to float to the island. He floated to the beach edge, and had fainted. In his dream, Keith could see a bright light. He was walking toward it, and then he was able to see a large gate. At that moment, he opened his eyes, and he could see a beach. He hoped that someone friendly was there. He fainted again...
 
Evelina walked along the island, watching colsly for her friends and any other passengers...
Maybe I was only dreaming.... And when I open my eyes on the count on 3, I'll be back in my bed, with my mom yelling at me to get up... She closed her eyes, and counted to 3, and opened them. Nothing happend, except for the squelling of the seagulls, which seemed to be laughing at her.
"SHUT UP!" she roared up to the palm trees, a roar which could be heard from miles away...
((Hint? Anyone? xD;;; ))
 
Miyu-chan said:
"SHUT UP!" she roared up to the palm trees, a roar which could be heard from miles away...
((Hint? Anyone? xD;;; ))
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Um, the conch (shell) from LOTF? Just a guess... XD

(Keith is still at the end of the beach laying in the water.)
 
Latios Master said:
Um, the conch (shell) from LOTF? Just a guess... XD

(Keith is still at the end of the beach laying in the water.)
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OOC - No idea, what's that? xD;;;; The hint was supposed to be someone hearing me, and rushing over. n_n; I'd continue is I could, but my mom'll kill me if she found out I was on the net. o_o;
 
Latios Master said:
Man... am I getting behind or what? XD 22sa requested a "PC Island" pic, so I guess I need to make one.

Ah, here we go:
[PokeCommunity.com] PokeCommunity Island


It might look a bit plain, but I was trying to make it as fast as I could. The green is forest, and the color around the green is sand.

(now to the story)
Keith's body began to float to the island. He floated to the beach edge, and had fainted. In his dream, Keith could see a bright light. He was walking toward it, and then he was able to see a large gate. At that moment, he opened his eyes, and he could see a beach. He hoped that someone friendly was there. He fainted again...
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XD This map looks good, except I think it should be much larger (like 2km wide or something)... a) have some cliffs and high hills/mountains and b) have a larger forest to support food production/anime survival. Have you seen the actually Lord of Flies map btw? And what does everyone else think?
[PokeCommunity.com] PokeCommunity Island
 
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