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Your character's eyes are too far apart. Nose is definitely crooked. The shape of its face is not aesthetically pleasing at all. It looks like a 3/10 with make up in this photo. I don't even want to imagine what it looks like without make up. I actually just threw up in my mouth, just thinking about it.
It's head is too big (although that may be, because of your giraffe neck posture). As for your character's hair, lol. Seriously, do something. It look like a horse.
Stare at your character's face for more than 5 seconds, and you will see how ugly your character is. The eyes which are too far apart is what ruins/damages the face even further. Unfortunately for it, that can't be surgically fixed, lol.
It's arms are way too long. lol at how they hang by it's sides. Kind of reminds me of lurch. As for your legs, we all know there is extra padding there. Don't even let me start on its pale complexion. Its hard to sum up a creature like that in one word. 'REVOLTING' would be unfair, since it doesn't reflect how repulsive it looks. GROTESQUE is stretching it. But somewhere in between, is where your avatar would be, on the scale of an average machine.
I'm sorry if my words seem a little harsh. Just so you know, I sugar coated this post as much as possible.