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Old October 6th, 2011 (09:05 PM).
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Skymin
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: australia
Age: 21
Nature: Quirky
Nintendoshs's Jhoto: Zombiemon is declined.
This is better than last time, but the storyline is still lacking. Why can Entei/Suicune/Raikou turn into humans? How did they come to start the alliance? You still haven't explained why that team started the apocalypse. Was it a disease? Where did the plague start? How did it start? Please try and go into detail and such, unless you want to make plot twists and such.

ohHeyVaporeon.'s It Begins And Ends In The Stadium. and OOC/SU is accepted!
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