Dements' Pokémon Crisis is accepted!
TheSiranna's Kingdom Wars: Fight of Shadows is declined.
The first thing I noticed is that you lack a rating. However, reading through your plot, there are a lot of loose ends. What were the evil wizards you mentioned looking for? Why did the kingdoms go to war? A lot more explanation's needed; right now it's a fair case of "this happened and then this happened and then..." which makes for a hard-to-follow storyline.
TheSiranna's Kingdom Wars: Fight of Shadows is declined.
The first thing I noticed is that you lack a rating. However, reading through your plot, there are a lot of loose ends. What were the evil wizards you mentioned looking for? Why did the kingdoms go to war? A lot more explanation's needed; right now it's a fair case of "this happened and then this happened and then..." which makes for a hard-to-follow storyline.