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The May's chest thing might be debatable... but I really don't think any kids are gonna grow up to objectify women over someone who was obviously crushing on May groping her in a fanart. I mean, come on. >>;
I inbreed my Pokémon all the time, but it's not like he's doing anything more than...
...Tell me you're just like, covering your ass. There are so many things wrong with this post. X_X It's not the kid that would be offended, it's their parent. and.... nothig bad is going to happen to those younger members. Nothing sexual is even happening... what, I can't eat a popsicle on a hot...
Viridian is actually a dark green color, and it's a bit hard to believe that all those changes could take place over only a year.
Sperate flashbacks with some kind of boarder, like ***
When you have a paragraph, don't use enter inside that paragraph. It looks really weird. Just let the...
Your grammar is the worst thing I've ever seen and frankly, it makes me want to die.
Aside from that, Birch isn't Max's last name and he's said many times that he wants a Treecko.
Since you're working on description, maybe you should revise your chapters seven or eight times, adding a little more each time. Good chapters take a long time to write.
This sort of goes with desciption, but you need to develop ideas more. I don't know if your character is just supposed to be...