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JX Valentine

Your aquatic overlord
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    Neo Groudon said:
    I still wonder what this is supposed to mean?
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    Sarcasm is an art that's inherently funny by itself, rather than something that needs to be announced.

    That and...

    *motions to the little bit after the entire log*

    Oh and Jax, not to be pushy or anything but when do you think you're going to be done beta-ing my fic? Take your time, I'm not rushing, I'm just wondering is all...
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    Halfway done. There's a number of points I had to rephrase and a few I had to question the logic of, both of which took a bit of time and effort, particularly because I've also been working a lot recently. Sorry.
     

    Feign

    Clain
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    By the by, talking about red-heads reminded me of the ginger kids episode on South Park XD
     
    Misheard Whisper

    Misheard Whisper

    [b][color=#FF0000]I[/color] [color=#FF7F00]also[/c
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    Feign said:
    By the by, talking about red-heads reminded me of the ginger kids episode on South Park XD
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    Valentine said:
    Fixed.

    Seriously, guys. Not to be a nazi or anything, but the summary started as a snarky account of the general events of what was going on. It's not actually a chat. *thumbs up*
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    Er, yes. More "" and less ** for one thing.

    By the by, talking about red-heads reminded me of the ginger kids episode on South Park XD
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    lolwut.

    AND THIS MACHINE IS NOW OFFICIALLY EVIL! ITS PRIMARY FUNCTION IS THE DESTRUCTION OF ALEXIS! >:[ IT MUST BE DESTROOOOYED! *pant pant*
     

    Giratina ♀

    what's your sign?
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    Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
    Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
    Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
    Us: "Um... 'kay?"
    Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
    Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
    Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
    Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
    The rest of us: "Word."
    Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
    Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
    Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
    liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write.
    Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
    Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
    Harry Potter: "What?"
    Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
    The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
    Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
    Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
    The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
    solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
    The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
    Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
    The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
    Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
    Us: "Finally."
    Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
    The rest of us: "Serious business."
    Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
    Everyone: "Aw . . ."
    Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"
    Jax: *wandering back into the thread drunkenly* "I don't actually know where I am!"
    Citrinin: "O BEE-TEE-DUBS, Sparkling Dragon, I notice LEGENDARIES."
    Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING."
    Citrinin: "Oops. Misinterpretation, yes?"
    Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING. PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE MAN BEHIND THE CURTAIN."
    Mika: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Jax: "I'm still drunk."
    Mika: "Elvesmonkstortureevilwtforgy"
    Citrinin: "The voices... they[sic] are too many."
    Mika: "Does Jax share those beverages she's procured? o3o"
    Neo Groudon: "Hi, I'm new here....Lulz"
    Everyone: "Ghostbusters! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_O7yn0k8Fw" [that's right, we can pronounce URLs out loud now]
    Mika: "Yeah... gunna need some beverages. And need to remind myself not to procrastinate. ~3~"
    Neo Groudon: "Yay bandwagon! I'm doing it wrong!"
    Feign: *talking in a bad dub* "I am ninja master!"
    Neo Groudon: "Still doingitwrong!Withoutspacesthistime!"
    Jax: "You sure are, kid."
    Feign: "Strokes Sparkles genitally"
    Us: "I hope you realise what you just said . . ."
    Everyone:"Lulz, Freud."
    Sparkling Dragon: *slaps* "Keep your hands to yourself!"
    Shrike Flamestar: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Sparkling Dragon: "tl;dr MY FIC."
    Jax: "I spiked the punch. Teehee."
    Sparkling Dragon: *sings drunkenly*
    Feign: "lol poison"
    Sparkling Dragon: *dies*
    Shrike Flamestar: *Fails at his attempt to return sanity to the lounge*
    Sparkling Dragon: "JAX. TITS OR GTFO."
    Jax: "Oh, for the love of Me, what are you ****heads doing?"
    Neo Groudon: "I'm still doing it wrong! ROTFLcopter! :D"
    Feign: "Hey, guys! Look at this new shiny object I found!"
    The FFL: "It's so pretty..."
    Breezy: *puts on her robe and wizard's hat*
    Jax(entine): "You're doing it wrong." [waves magic editing wand and fixes various unnamed stuffs]
     

    Feign

    Clain
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    lol yeah, I think I had that for a while then it melted because o f latenightitus and then we all got confused and started becoming robots...

    O god who am I kidding! *pets unfinished fic and begins to cry*
     
    Bay

    Bay

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    Valentine said:
    Yep. Don't worry, Bay. We can still continue the affair we're having behind Asty's back.
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    Haha, nice. XD

    And yeah, party people, Jax is the queen of sarcasm, so you better do the script thing right. I know I wouldn't be able to do it right, hence why I'm not touching it like how I'm not touching the spiked punch Sparkling Dragon gave me. XD

    On the name genrerator thing...

    B.A.Y.: Bloodthirsty Abmonination of Yuckiness

    XD;
     
    Misheard Whisper

    Misheard Whisper

    [b][color=#FF0000]I[/color] [color=#FF7F00]also[/c
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    Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
    Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
    Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
    Us: "Um... 'kay?"
    Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
    Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
    Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
    Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
    The rest of us: "Word."
    Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
    Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
    Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
    liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write.
    Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
    Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
    Harry Potter: "What?"
    Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
    The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
    Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
    Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
    The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
    solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
    The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
    Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
    The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
    Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
    Us: "Finally."
    Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
    The rest of us: "Serious business."
    Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
    Everyone: "Aw . . ."
    Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"
    Jax: *wandering back into the thread drunkenly* "I don't actually know where I am!"
    Citrinin: "O BEE-TEE-DUBS, Sparkling Dragon, I notice LEGENDARIES."
    Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING."
    Citrinin: "Oops. Misinterpretation, yes?"
    Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING. PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE MAN BEHIND THE CURTAIN."
    Mika: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Jax: "I'm still drunk."
    Mika: "Elvesmonkstortureevilwtforgy"
    Citrinin: "The voices... they[sic] are too many."
    Mika: "Does Jax share those beverages she's procured? o3o"
    Neo Groudon: "Hi, I'm new here....Lulz"
    Everyone: "Ghostbusters! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_O7yn0k8Fw" [that's right, we can pronounce URLs out loud now]
    Mika: "Yeah... gunna need some beverages. And need to remind myself not to procrastinate. ~3~"
    Neo Groudon: "Yay bandwagon! I'm doing it wrong!"
    Feign: *talking in a bad dub* "I am ninja master!"
    Neo Groudon: "Still doingitwrong!Withoutspacesthistime!"
    Jax: "You sure are, kid."
    Feign: "Strokes Sparkles genitally"
    Us: "I hope you realise what you just said . . ."
    Everyone:"Lulz, Freud."
    Sparkling Dragon: *slaps* "Keep your hands to yourself!"
    Shrike Flamestar: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Sparkling Dragon: "tl;dr MY FIC."
    Jax: "I spiked the punch. Teehee."
    Sparkling Dragon: *sings drunkenly*
    Feign: "lol poison"
    Sparkling Dragon: *dies*
    Shrike Flamestar: *Fails at his attempt to return sanity to the lounge*
    Sparkling Dragon: "JAX. TITS OR GTFO."
    Jax: "Oh, for the love of Me, what are you ****heads doing?"
    Neo Groudon: "I'm still doing it wrong! ROTFLcopter! :D"
    Feign: "Hey, guys! Look at this new shiny object I found!"
    The FFL: "It's so pretty..."
    Breezy: *puts on her robe and wizard's hat*
    Jax: "You're doing it wrong." *waves magic editing wand and fixes various unnamed stuffs*
    Feign: "Sorry guys, I was up late last night and my fic isn't finished so I'mm'a drown my sorrows in alcohol."
    Sparkling Dragon: *subliminal Shattered advertising*
     

    Feign

    Clain
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    I don't drink alcohol though.

    On another note, I am currently writing another fic XD
     

    Feign

    Clain
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    Ha! Well bring it on! XD

    I've already written down several plot directions, some as different as the next, so it will be interesting what people choose, and how the character will develop, depending on these choices.
     
    Misheard Whisper

    Misheard Whisper

    [b][color=#FF0000]I[/color] [color=#FF7F00]also[/c
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    *adds*

    Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
    Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
    Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
    Us: "Um... 'kay?"
    Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
    Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
    Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
    Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
    The rest of us: "Word."
    Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
    Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
    Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
    liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write.
    Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
    Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
    Harry Potter: "What?"
    Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
    The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
    Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
    Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
    The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
    solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
    The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
    Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
    The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
    Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
    Us: "Finally."
    Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
    The rest of us: "Serious business."
    Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
    Everyone: "Aw . . ."
    Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"
    Jax: *wandering back into the thread drunkenly* "I don't actually know where I am!"
    Citrinin: "O BEE-TEE-DUBS, Sparkling Dragon, I notice LEGENDARIES."
    Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING."
    Citrinin: "Oops. Misinterpretation, yes?"
    Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING. PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE MAN BEHIND THE CURTAIN."
    Mika: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Jax: "I'm still drunk."
    Mika: "Elvesmonkstortureevilwtforgy"
    Citrinin: "The voices... they[sic] are too many."
    Mika: "Does Jax share those beverages she's procured? o3o"
    Neo Groudon: "Hi, I'm new here....Lulz"
    Everyone: "Ghostbusters! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_O7yn0k8Fw" [that's right, we can pronounce URLs out loud now]
    Mika: "Yeah... gunna need some beverages. And need to remind myself not to procrastinate. ~3~"
    Neo Groudon: "Yay bandwagon! I'm doing it wrong!"
    Feign: *talking in a bad dub* "I am ninja master!"
    Neo Groudon: "Still doingitwrong!Withoutspacesthistime!"
    Jax: "You sure are, kid."
    Feign: "Strokes Sparkles genitally"
    Us: "I hope you realise what you just said . . ."
    Everyone:"Lulz, Freud."
    Sparkling Dragon: *slaps* "Keep your hands to yourself!"
    Shrike Flamestar: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
    Sparkling Dragon: "tl;dr MY FIC."
    Jax: "I spiked the punch. Teehee."
    Sparkling Dragon: *sings drunkenly*
    Feign: "lol poison"
    Sparkling Dragon: *dies*
    Shrike Flamestar: *Fails at his attempt to return sanity to the lounge*
    Sparkling Dragon: "JAX. TITS OR GTFO."
    Jax: "Oh, for the love of Me, what are you ****heads doing?"
    Neo Groudon: "I'm still doing it wrong! ROTFLcopter! :D"
    Feign: "Hey, guys! Look at this new shiny object I found!"
    The FFL: "It's so pretty..."
    Breezy: *puts on her robe and wizard's hat*
    Jax: "You're doing it wrong." *waves magic editing wand and fixes various unnamed stuffs*
    Feign: "Sorry guys, I was up late last night and my fic isn't finished so I'mm'a drown my sorrows in alcohol."
    Sparkling Dragon: *subliminal Shattered advertising*
    txteclipse: "This once-funny joke is sufficiently beyond any hope of redemption."
     
    txteclipse

    txteclipse

    The Last
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    Sparkling Dragon said:
    Oh not you as well! D: Didn't you see what Asty said? This will be zetta hard to pull off.
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    Spoilers are your friend. I'd format it like this:

    You find an apple.

    If you eat the apple, go to #1. If you clock your best friend with it, go to #2.

    #1
    Spoiler:


    #2
    Spoiler:
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    Feign

    Clain
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    Though you'd have to plan a lot more ahead, and have a much more complete story.

    While its good to have a permanent choice (so it could be replayed), it would require a good amount of "pages" ahead.
     

    Citrinin

    Nephrotoxic.
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    It still looks a bit messy, even with spoilers. ;o

    It would work better if it was given its own website, so the "go to"s could be simple hyperlinks.
     
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