first of all, you you use the formal application form?
secondly, you have a huge number of tile errors. the puddles don't suit the bridges and the beach gets cut off.
the whole thing's got too much space and it's just too square
and when you do a remake, you make it so that people don't know it's one.
well, the gym is out of proportion, there's more than one exit at the top of the map. and there are so so many tile errors.
seriously.
again, these maps need a serious re-work if you're going to be considered as a mapper.
and this one's abismal. LOOK AT ALL THE TILE ERRORS!
it's really overcrowded, you even have lava tiles in there o_O
the ledges are screwed up,the caves don't work with everything else on the map.
oh and also use the inbuilt map image capture that advance map has, rather than putting a screen capture into paint or another image editor and cropping it.
i would also recommend spending some time in the maps rating thread as well.
oh and don't use the super massive font either.
anyways, to G.K.S., i haven't quite worked out what i'm gonna do wiv the cave, but i shall post it here later.
EDIT: screw that. i'll make one when you give me the hack and i'll send you the updated patch.
i've just had a miraculous brainstorm of ideas for caves...that's all. lol.