The render is slightly bad quality and I don't like the fot. It seems a tad messyy.
Make it neater and get a higher quality render. 6/10
(Also lol whoever neg repped my post no.29328 here, so i'm replying. Action is something people consider when making a tag. When you make a tag you'd like it to have some sort of movement rather than a dull position. So in otherwords, a render that is "doing something" Or "moving" in the render rather than being still. It's something most people who use PS take into account. Next time just vm me lol)