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Snailvivor [Challenge 15]

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Once upon a time there was a cow. The cow's name was Moolah, who had everything she wanted in life. She was an independent cow who didn't need no bull. One day, a goat named Rocky came down the nearby mountain to seek her advice. Rocky approached Moolah and asked, "What is your key to success?"

Moolah turned to Rocky and replied, "What kind of success are you looking for?" The goat used all his might to think of a really good answer, but found himself lost as to what he really wanted in life.

Moolah, sensing Rocky's indecision, offered to give the goat a new purpose in life. So, Moolah, ever true to her strong, independent nature, clicked her hooves together and exclaimed "What you need is a spicy musical number to take the first step in learning exactly what you need out of life!" So Moolah took Rocky down to the local tavern where musicians would play most every night. The two entered the tavern and spoke with another local hero, a legendary guitarist who had slain a great demon with an intricate riff.

The guitarist, Brian April, strummed his guitar and suddenly the whole tavern sprung to life with dancing and a fancy light show. But one woman in the crowd, with pale green skin and in a knockoff dress, jumped on a table and shouted "April, I am here to finally claim your soul as mine!" It was Melanie Wynwood, a young woman whom was thought to be an evil sorceress.

Melanie cast a spell, producing a golden guitar out of thin air, "I challenge you to a guitar battle!"

Melanie and Brian both stared deeply into each other's eyes as Moolah and Rocky watched the two rivals rock it out with "Centuries" by Fall Out Boy. Both sides played extremely well, but, in the end, Melanie became victorious.
 
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Once upon a time, there was a town full of tiny midgets. Despite the fearsome dragon stalking them, they wouldn't stop working. They were proud creatures that took joy in working and advancing their civilization, sothey refused to bow down to the evil dragon. But the evil dragon wants to make them his slaves and make them work for him for eternity of their life. This atrocity had tainted the scenery, causing the once fertile lands to become barren and desolate. They already tried everything to kill the dragon, swords, bows, spears not a single one of them worked. Due to their desire to protect their civilization from the dragon, they began crafting new tools and new weaponry at a rate faster than other neighboring races. One day, one of the midgets discovered something amazing. It was a fresh, shiny piece of cheese at the size of your average bungalow! Little did they know, the cheese was the dragon's weakness. Despite this, the one true Midgetwho called the area her domain knew the ins and out of cheeses-Gouda camember, Grana pedano, Stilton, Brie, manchego-unfortunately, she was rather old and decrepit, so she couldn't observe the cheese herself. Luckily, she had a young apprentice, and taught him all her secrets; but he lives very far away, so they called their best adventurer, Bulbo Bigginz, to search for him. He joined the green arrow (the one who should not be there) and Katniss Evercheese ( the one made up) in the mighty quest to defeat the dragon. Together they rode a long way, fearing not the evil creatures, nor the hazardous nature of the dreadful road ahead of them.On their way to find the Apprentice, they came across a large mountain range that stretched as far as the eye could see. They climbed the mountain and came across a hut where they saw a shadowy figure coming towards them.
It was none other than the young apprentice, Gundolf the Gray, but he seemed different, like something -or someone- had brought out his evil side, which he always had struggled to hide from the world.
 
Ok, this is getting annoying to scroll through each time, so could we make an effort to put each post in a spoiler tag?
 
Roughly 20 hours remain in this challenge. Saltzen is currently in the lead with 2 more sentences than Escargot.
 
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Desinishon √
Ullion √
Absol used bite! √
JohnnyMustang √
alexkaz61 √
CatmanDaTrainer √
Kaneki!!! √
Lycanthropy
NightKrow *insert tick here*

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Hey gunner im totally going TK torture you to death first aot now rock you are só dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;!!;!;;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Once upon a time, there was a town full of tiny midgets. Despite the fearsome dragon stalking them, they wouldn't stop working. They were proud creatures that took joy in working and advancing their civilization, sothey refused to bow down to the evil dragon. But the evil dragon wants to make them his slaves and make them work for him for eternity of their life. This atrocity had tainted the scenery, causing the once fertile lands to become barren and desolate. They already tried everything to kill the dragon, swords, bows, spears not a single one of them worked. Due to their desire to protect their civilization from the dragon, they began crafting new tools and new weaponry at a rate faster than other neighboring races. One day, one of the midgets discovered something amazing. It was a fresh, shiny piece of cheese at the size of your average bungalow! Little did they know, the cheese was the dragon's weakness. Despite this, the one true Midgetwho called the area her domain knew the ins and out of cheeses-Gouda camember, Grana pedano, Stilton, Brie, manchego-unfortunately, she was rather old and decrepit, so she couldn't observe the cheese herself. Luckily, she had a young apprentice, and taught him all her secrets; but he lives very far away, so they called their best adventurer, Bulbo Bigginz, to search for him. He joined the green arrow (the one who should not be there) and Katniss Evercheese ( the one made up) in the mighty quest to defeat the dragon. Together they rode a long way, fearing not the evil creatures, nor the hazardous nature of the dreadful road ahead of them.On their way to find the Apprentice, they came across a large mountain range that stretched as far as the eye could see. They climbed the mountain and came across a hut where they saw a shadowy figure coming towards them.
It was none other than the young apprentice, Gundolf the Gray, but he seemed different, like something -or someone- had brought out his evil side, which he always had struggled to hide from the world. Bulbo attempted to explain the situation to Gundolf - "Gundolf, we need your help to identify some cheese!"

Not much later, Gundolf was inspecting the cheese my all possible means - sight, smell, taste, touch - and when none of these seemed to give a clear answer, he opened his third eye and soon enough the surroundings were filled with an odd magic power. The power overcame him, transmitting his energy and being into a sorr of celestial being which transmitted him into some sort of god status.
 
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Edit : Cay, we've got another 10 sentences, can you edit please.
 
Why'd you end the story?! We all have one more sentence left!
 
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Guys, I did the thing.
 
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