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Wow Alex, nice job with the scripts. Awesome. I liked Team Rocket, they seemed dangerous. At last a good hack. Ask Harry to change the name of the thread so it indicates the release. ;)
I'm very font of this hack, but I noticed some things you could improve/fix:
Music 1- Six years ago (boat music kinda doesn't fit)
Music 2- When mom's in front of the statue (Should music change; the moment is supposedly touching, the happy music of the town)
Text Mistakes- Apostrophes, capitals, (Aide, Man with poliwhirl, Ray/Alice, Rocket) -Also, change "Your" to "You are". Sounds better.
Text- Old lady "I don't suppose you've seen Ray?" (Yeah,
Text- PokeBallS
Text- Rival before Oakwood (Received* not recieved)
Visual- flower animation
General- very easy lvling, Rare Pokemon
Also, noticed a paradox and a glitch:
Glitch:
And he took me to Cedar's lab. -.-
Paradox:
After the guy shows you how to jump (lol), you can just land on him from that ledge. Common paradox. XD
.. and I don't have a girlfriend, if that's what you're implying!
I'm very font of this hack, but I noticed some things you could improve/fix:
Music 1- Six years ago (boat music kinda doesn't fit)
Music 2- When mom's in front of the statue (Should music change; the moment is supposedly touching, the happy music of the town)
Text Mistakes- Apostrophes, capitals, (Aide, Man with poliwhirl, Ray/Alice, Rocket) -Also, change "Your" to "You are". Sounds better.
Text- Old lady "I don't suppose you've seen Ray?" (Yeah,
Text- PokeBallS
Text- Rival before Oakwood (Received* not recieved)
Visual- flower animation
General- very easy lvling, Rare Pokemon
Also, noticed a paradox and a glitch:
Glitch:
Spoiler:
And he took me to Cedar's lab. -.-
Paradox:
Spoiler:
.. and I don't have a girlfriend, if that's what you're implying!