Ruby hack: pokémon keyra

[eing15]

@Hiche
I searching one people to translate this hack, because my english isn't very good I think, But if people think that my english isn't very bad, I can try...
@dshayabusa
Yes, more tiles it look so rare, but I don't change at this moment..
@flareonmaster
Translate it's important, as well more people would understand ..
@Time
Yeah, I change this hability, I think that this hability is for birds... :S
@Sk8er Prince
The OW of leaders, yes, it's important, I will change in to next beta (Of course)
@BlahIsuck
Yes, some tiles are of zelda...(The tileset of "camping" is the tileset that have tiles of zelda..)
@charizardguy
Yes, It's very lazy, but until we find someone who wants to translate ... :S
If you think correct my English, what would I do, but I think my English is not entirely correct.
@TB pro
Thanks for your friendly coment^^
@Ryousha
I didn't understand much that you wanted to say :S
@Zel
Thanks for your friendly coment, and yes, this hack started on october, on the last year...(it have a lot of development time) (But I working serious six months ago..)

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Well, I'm working in the script of the chip, it's very long,it contain some chained script's, and I haven't got more time, That's why, so I am slow in making these scripts ...

Byeeee

 

[Chimchar 9]

this is weird because when i try to play it , it restarts the rom.
do you know why ?

 

[eing15]

Hum it's so rare :S
People of other forums can play it, and the dowload is the same... :S
For example; Edo or maku play it, and don't have any problems..=S

Well, I think that is for the rom (Are you sure that it's english rubí without mugs?:S)
Or what visualboy you use? =S

 

[Melash]

Wow, this hack is fantastic! I can't understand Spanish at all, but I still played thourgh it a little. I love the scripts, and all the tiles! I don't really like your style of mapping, but hey, I'm not complaining.

Anyway, I hope someone can translate this!

 

[Dudemanword]

Hey dude if you need help translating I would be happy to help.

 

[Lady Berlitz]

Woah, this is a great hack! I've been watching it for a while now at WAH, and it's progressing very well.
The graphics are quite good. I'll play it when I have the time. ^^

I hope it progresses more, good luck. ^^

 

[Wesley FG]

This Hack this very good, so still,
Tiles y Palletes Very Good,
I just do not like the beginning that has few battles with trainers

 

[eing15]

Well thanks for the coments, it animate me to continue the great job I think :)

Wesley FG, didn't like the "back" of sprite ?=S

okey people, let see, maybe before two hours or more, I post screens in english (translate by me, and say me that it understand :D) And the "advance" of beta three it more slow, because I work on translate (if will like of course)

Screen that I translate :)
(I think that is not bad, but it have more misspellings =S)

Well, say me thath you think about this :)
(I continue saying that I search one people to translate my hack :D please^^)

 

[~Edo~]

Wow eing, this hack is very cool XP...
Pkmn Keyra in english?, great =P.
Good luke, my friend X)

Good Bye!.

 

[TB Pro]

Erm...That's what i thought would happen. I applaud you for trying to translate it yourself, but the texts are hard to undertand, or don't make much sense.

This hack rom is create by eing15.
Should be: This ROM Hack is created by Eing15.
Not a BIG issue, it's easily understandable.

Hello Sora, today you will reciebe your pokémon?
Hello, Sora, today you will recieve your first Pokémon?
This one is almost perfect, just a bit messed up.

ROCK TOWN
"One place with more rocks."
ROCK TOWN
"The place with many rocks."
This one was hard to understand, it didn't really make sense...

Well, I explain for you that use the POKéDEX.
Well, I will explain to you, how to use the Pokédex.
I don't know what exactly you were trying to say here...

Please don't be offended by my comments, I mean, it's great that you tried! Well, BOL!

 

[Lady Berlitz]

This hack rom is create by eing15.
Should be: This ROM Hack is created by Eing15.

Hello Sora, today you will reciebe your pokémon?
Hello, Sora, today you will recieve your first Pokémon?

Well, I explain for you that use the POKéDEX.
Well, I will explain to you, how to use the Pokédex.

1. The "h" in "hack" doesn't have to be capitalized, and his "name is "eing15", not "Eing15". ^^
2. Actually, it's "receive". :D
3. There's no need for that comma after "I will explain to you". XD

New screenshots look good, though. Keep up the good work, eing15.

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Erm...That's what i thought would happen. I applaud you for trying to translate it yourself, but the texts are hard to undertand, or don't make much sense.

This hack rom is create by eing15.
Should be: This ROM Hack is created by Eing15.
Not a BIG issue, it's easily understandable.

Hello Sora, today you will reciebe your pokémon?
Hello, Sora, today you will recieve your first Pokémon?
This one is almost perfect, just a bit messed up.

ROCK TOWN
"One place with more rocks."
ROCK TOWN
"The place with many rocks."
This one was hard to understand, it didn't really make sense...

Well, I explain for you that use the POKéDEX.
Well, I will explain to you, how to use the Pokédex.
I don't know what exactly you were trying to say here...

Please don't be offended by my comments, I mean, it's great that you tried! Well, BOL!

¿TB Pro™, I see that you are correcting Eing's Grammatical/Spelling mistakes.

I think you should be the Text Corrector in this Hack.

(It is like, after Eing translated the Hack to "English", you correct his

Grammatical/Spelling mistakes.)

 

[eing15]

Well, thanks for the post^^
But, I think that i prefer that one people translate my hack in to english and that he understand the two languages (I understand the two languages, but I have many mistakes :3 in english)

And that I translate it is a problem, more words i can't say what do I refer...=S
(in english) Well, i continue search one people :)

PS: If you know one people that know the two languages, and he/she want help me, comunicate me please :)
PS2: Hum, maybe I continue the translation me, but I need that one person, correct me. Thanks

 

[TB Pro]

Well, if you want to translate it, and have somebody fix it, then just ask me.:D @Esmas, 1. Err...I know, It's just how I do it;) 2. Damn typos... 3. There is no NEED for it, but It's how I write. It works either way.

 

[eing15]

Well, I see that my hack is on a second page, and i don't like this...
I post one script in the end of beta 2.
Is too interesting I think^^

"Before seeing this script, you should know that a police officer, has warned that the rockets have entered the real ocean ruins, and are preparing to steal the piece of emerald ..."​

https://es.youtube.com/watch?v=PzD35e-sp2M

I explain what's happening in the script. (is in spanish, but I explain in english in this post^^)

Spoiler:

"Upon entering the ruins ocean, you see that piece of emerald is still, then comes the leader of the third gym "Faust" and you said it was unusual, in the midst of this confusion so great, everything gets very dark, and you see a very thick fog.
After that we should move this darkness and fog that, you do not know of that has happened, just that ..
The emerald is not!
Then suddenly appears the rocket team, saying that this must be the piece of emerald, then choose to fight with them so that you return the piece of emerald.
Then you see that you do not return, and it appears the police and arrested giovanni, but at that time appears platinum, and makes everything turns dark again and with a very thick fog.
It was he who had stolen the emerald, using a ball of smoke!
Amid this chaos, the team rocket, fleeing the ruins ocean.
So then when everything returns to normal, is eing (me) with a member of the team Eda, then asked for the team rocket, but have already gone ..
And you tell him, coming to good hour, then eing, suspect you and tells you that perhaps you are an infiltrator of the rocket team, which goes from good, but it is actually wrong.
Then struggles with him, to show that it is not.
After the battle, you said that you are very powerful, and not any coach, has this way of fighting.
Although an executive if the rocket team.
At the end eing goes, and you decide to return to cp, you're very tired."

Well, I hope that you understand the explain of the script.
Byeeee

 

[Satoshi Sugimori]

Heey!
Nice update :D can't wait to see more of your hack;)
And I think it's better to post your vid like this :p

 

[Outlander]

this looks really cool so far im really impressed with it

 

[GKS]

I love the mapping. Good luck.

These tiles are very original.

 

[Dukey]

Great Sprites, OW's and Tiles.

7/10

 

[eing15]

Well, thanks for the post men/women.
I post now one script of the ship, it's the start.
Maybe i don't post the other parts of script. (after visit your room, the script continous..)



https://es.youtube.com/watch?v=7tb-sjUA0pU

(thanks to sora to upload my video ^^)

Explain the video...
[For enter in the ship, you enter normal, but the police say that you don't enter to your rom if you haven't got a ticket, when it passed, julia appear in the ship, and give you one ticket, and you and she visit the ship. You know Edo, one person that knows the captains of the ship (xiros and tenzou), tenzou arrived, and teach you inside the ship.]

Well, i hope that you understand me :)