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Zeth saw Evelina floating on the water, surely she was unconsious. He swam over to her, and with one arm, he held her close to him, as so she wouldn't drown. Even though she probably couldn't hear him, he whispered in her ear, "It's going to be ok"

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
"Ahh!! Did you see that?!" Jordan yelled in terror, to make himself heard over the monstrous dark clouds that loomed over his head as he gazed out intently off the side of the roaring boat.
"Alas, lad, I did. It appears as if we are too late...........lad?"
Jordan didn't have the heart to respond. Nor the tears to relieve himself of this pain.
"Lad. You tried. There's nothing you can do-"
"......I didn't even have the chance to say.....hi.....
They were my best friends.......and I never even met them...."
The sailor looked at him in sympathy, as he watched him fall effortlessly to his knees.

"News Flash!" The TV blarred. The sailor quickly grabbed it out of his pocket.
"There have been reports of giant waves coming in towards the shore. Evacuation from the low lands will occur immediately"

The sailor glanced out at the ocean, to see a giant wave towering menacingly over the boat.
"......boy! Quick! Snap out of it!" The sailor bellowed. Jordan, still mourning over the loss of his friends, slowly turned towards the man.
"GET OUT OF THE BOAT! YOU'LL BE CRUSHED!" With that, he threw a lifejacket at Jordan. It collided with his head, for he was too busy dreading the incoming wave.
"Ow!!" he said, as he rubbed his head. He quickly remembered the wave, so he rushed to the side of the boat as he put on the jacket, but then, just as quickly, he remembered the sailor.
"What about you?"
"Aye, a captain always goes down with his ship."
"But you can't just stay here! You'll be down before your ship!"
"Yes, but what you must understand is that-ARGH!"
Jordan grabbed his arm without a need for a reply, and jumped overboard. Within seconds, the wave came crashing down, engulfing the boat, and shoving Jordan and the sailor into oblivion. Jordan's mind raced as he was swirled to and fro from the impact. He held onto the sailor as tight as he could, but a growing darkness began to consume him....

Will I survive?
Gee, I sure hope hehe...
 
Evelina stirred, realizing that she was floating on top of the water, very deep water.
"Ahhh!" she let out a small scream and lost her balence. Then she noticed Zeth, holding her with one hand.
"Thanks." she said gratefully, and started to tread on the water. I forgot about the lifejacket... she thought.
Suddenly, she was hit by a wave of panic and shock.
"Where are the others?" she said, silently praying that they're alright.
 
"I don't know, but I made sure they were all swimming and up before I jumped, so they should be ok I told them to go to that island over there. Come on, we better go to."

With his one arm free, and the other arm holding on to Evelina, Zeth made his own strange stroke, which surprisingly worked. He didn't let go of the girl, he didn't want her to panic or lose control, so he held on to her, and with a grip so she couldn't drown.

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
Evelina looked at the direction Zeth was pointing, and to her surprise, there was an island.
"I thought we were in the middle of the ocean." she said, smiling alittle. Thank God...that I actually have people with me, instead of a Wilson soccer ball.
Zeth started swimming with one hand around her, Evelina was a bit surprised by the gesture, but thankful.
Thankful for having friends.
 
As Kyle got to the island, he thought about everyone who had become missing, presumed dead. "****..." he thought, before fainting.

When he woke up, he looked around him. There was a lot of Coconut trees and wood for fires. Pity he couldn't make a fire, he mused.

"Time for a walk," he said to no one in particular again, and strolled off, smiling slightly.

He didn't notice the island, two miles away that the others had managed to get to.
 
Things rapidly grew worse. His unconcious knew one heck of a nasty ride was coming up. Discomfort spread, as the plane shook violently, like a part of the plane exploded or something. A wave of sheer abandoning. Everybody was startled. People rebased their thoughts on terror as they tried hard to calm each other down. Kids let out cries, then let out more cries, and the rest cursed helplessly in such terrible disturbance. Flight servants, announcements tried to calm the people, but their voices drowned in the collective screaming. A jolt blatantly shook the plane again.
Tom's heartbeat paced up. He stopped looking around, and faced forward, just trying to breath. Shaked his head. Thoughts of realization raced through his head. The pain the plane caused made him think. We're all going to die! Woopiieededo!! A smile slightly appeared on his face but was quickly replaced by light contempt. This can't be the end... The plane was heading down, down, becoming completely impossible to trust. Too funny... he thought as his awkward, puny, empty, devastated past life flashed through his mind suddenly. Devastation is funny. He smiled behind a little tear in his right eye, then there was the music, self-education, cool people as the better parts. No return. Closing his eyes tightly, he looked down to find a little sense of enduring attitude in his mind, agh.. he opened his eyes again to reach for the emergency life jacket dangling from the ceiling. The plane had released the life jackets.
So all h*ll breaks loose, he smiled as he put the life jacket on and let the thing puff itself up. People were jumping off the plane through the emergency exists already but he stayed back, turning his eye to the window, he wanted to jump when the plane was closer to the water. They were shouting, screaming, and hesitating by the emergency exists. He knew if they were going to pull through this catastrophic event, they had to stick together, fall together... but Tom most likely have to go on his own right now.
He pondered. God knows what's best... so what if I die. Heya time bomb. Hmm... ... ...divine spark. Is it in love to survive. So heck, drive. Finally determined, he quickly made his way to the emergency exist with his suitcase after deciding how he's going to jump and take the fall. The dark world, dark clouded world, was still seeable at that moment. The rain air wasn't too cold that night. Suspending his thoughts, with his suitcase he carefully jumped feet first slanted into the raging wind speed, and kept his mouth open to avoid air pressure death. Then he let go of his suitcase. Almost immediately, he was near the surface of the ocean. He closed his eyes, held his breath, and broke into the surface of the ocean. A shocking pain. Don't open your mouth in deep water, I kept in mind.

((Jeez.... ) Took me like 3 hours of inconsistent effort (was chatting) to get this stupid post done and posted...)

Kayleigh said:
((Ah, thank you all for waiting for me. ^_^; I'm at my grandparent's house right now, and so I can come online. I hope that my computer gets fixed soon... This is getting annoying. Also, I'll try and have the group picture done fairly soon. I just don't know what all of the characters look like, and so I'm having to go by their descriptions. If you didn't give one, then I'm afraid that I won't be drawing him or her. Sorry! And does anyone like the idea of a theme? Like maybe, have them all sitting out on the island's beach, doing different things? For example, mine would be around some sort of animal, lol.))
Click to expand...
Make me muscular!!! :laugh: lol, jk, I don't deserve them... much of them anyway. ._. About theme... what can it be? Lengendary...? o_o Hmm... I have no clue. XD And thanks for your special efforts Kay! ^^

Also, I think we'll need a map of the "PC island," heh. Latios Master?

[PokeCommunity.com] PokeCommunity Island
 
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I swam to the island and found everyone.
"OK guys!" I said. "In case you didn't know, I'm alive!"
 
((Whoo-hoo! Guess what? My computer is fixed. ^_^ We got a new mouse, and we took it to a computer store in our town, and they fixed it! It works so much better. Also, thanks for not posting too much without me. I was about to die without a computer, lol. And... Thank you, 22sa! That's a nice idea!))

Am I... alive? Kayleigh thought as she drifted further and further underwater.
It's so dark, and cold.
She kept her eyes closed as she sank. She had sudden flashbacks of the plane ride, and her friends. She finally opened her eyes, only to realize that she was under the water. She gasped and quickly swam up to the surface.
Did they make it? she thought, turning her head in every direction. No sight of anyone. The rain continued to pour, as she swam around the area.
The island. They must have gone there if they're alive... Please God, let them be alive.
She almost called her friends' names, until she remembered that that would be a bad idea. Sharks. Noise and sudden movement would attract sharks, and most likely, in water this deep, there would be a lot of them, and they would be very large.
I have to get to the island... she thought, closing her eyes. She tried to swim further, but the water was so cold. She was shivering, and she could barely move. She was also scared; she feared sharks more than anything on the planet, and right now, she was in their territory.
 
Zeth washed up the shore, drifting between consciousness and unconsciousness. He looked up for a few seconds, didn't see anything, and before completely blacking out he heard some noises. The last thing he remembered was a stroke of thunder and waves crahing upon his numb body.

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
I'll probably die anyway! she thought, clenching her fists and curling her legs up under her body.
I can hardly move. I wish I was home now... Why did I have to get onto that stupid plane?
Tears formed in her eyes as she continued floating there, remaining perfectly still. She could feel the waves beginning to get stronger, as the wind blew across the water.
All of those people probably died. They're all gone; all of the children, and mothers, and fathers. And their relatives at home don't even know.
She stayed in the same place for about a minute, and then began to move.
I need to go find them. I know that they're alive, she thought. She used all of her remaining strength to swim up to the nearby island, and then she collapsed on the beach.
Well, I made it, she thought. Then she blacked out.
 
A sudden wave crashed onto her, seperating Evelina from Zeth. She was tossed and turned for hours. She spotted a dim outline of an island in the pouring rain.
Driven by fear and the will to live, she swam vigorsly to the shore of the island, as she touched the sandy shore, her eyes closed.
This is too much... But at least I'm still alive, I think... she thought as she fell asleap.
 
He didn't know how much time had passed when he woke up. There was still thunder, and some heavy rain pounding on his back, and he had a throbbing headache. He stood up, but he did so with a lot of effort, his body was just about to collapse, or so he felt. He didn't see much of anything when he got up, just some trees, an endless sea of sand, some bushes, and some rocks here and there.

"Ah, my head, I can't... where is everyone?... I think I'd better...."He didn't get to finish his thought, his head was hurting him so much that 5 minutes after gaining consciousness, he went back to the dark abyss in his mind.

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
"Uhhn... Huh?" Kayleigh was awokened by a bright light shining on her eyes. She opened them to see that the rain had ended, and everything was calm. It was the next day; she had made it through one night. She turned her head and saw several exotic parrots perching on branches, palms swaying with the wind, and crystal clear water crashing up onto the shore.
"I'm alive, I guess," she whispered to herself as she stood up. She walked down the long beach, looking for any sign of her friends.
"Hello?! Is anyone still alive?" she shouted, picking up her pace. She was beginning to get worried; what if she was on this island all alone?
 
I woke up and saw Kayleigh. I ran over to her.
"I'm alive!" I told her.
 
((About time!! XDD WB. ^^ Thanks... Ya, what are we going to do without a creative map? You guys are going really fast, lol. Okay... like I know fast is. *sleep posts* :sleeping: ))

...The incredible loss of heat made Tom unconcious. He sank deeper into the ocean. His every nerve went numb for a couple seconds.
Sinking... he thought, awaking to his situation. His life jacket had prevented him from sinking down even faster.
He jolted himself and started kicking, doing whatever struggling he can to get back up to the surface..... it worked. Tom broke out the surface of the ocean into the world of thunderstorm rain, gasped for air and whiped face with one of his hands, so he can open his eyes. Suitcase.. suitcase.. where's my suitcase? He thought as he looked around for it. He found it. It was floating not too far away, it floated almost as good as those floaters used in swimming pools. Though he was awfully tired, he quickly struggled to retrieve it. Grabbing his suitcase, he breathed a sigh of relief then he looked to the dark sky.
Smile, I'm all right, Tom told myself. I wish I had a camera here to take a picture of those clouds... this rain... it's a dread to put up with but it looks great at the same time. Why? Tornados look much worse! Ah, Tom shakes his head. He looks around in effort to see if there's other people around, or many even land. He saw land, in the direction the plane came from. He realized most people had jumped off the plane must've landed on the other side of it. Meanwhile Tom was still freezing in the storm. I have to keep moving.. or I'll get really cold. He started kicking towards the island. Not bad...
He got to the island in about 5 minutes. On the way, he had wondered why this has all happened, what would he do now? Is this suppose to be some turning point in his life? Some ending and beginning? Where to go...? Do I want to go home? Where does He want me to go? ....Whatever. Tom concluded he's suppose to survive, and get rescued, then whatever. He was alone right now, on the opposite side of all other survivers, if any survived that is. They had to. I saw some parachutes. This wasn't hard to survive. But he knew he could've very well died. He walked up onto the land, shivering, shivering so much...
It was just about completely dark now. Tom felt too exhausted and confused. So I've just been dumped into the water so I could swim to this island... and same with rest of them who jumped? He needed a place to sleep till the next morning.
Now to live a dirty life... since there's no sanitation. Will there be water availiable? Food to eat? Will there REALLY be other PEOPLE here? First thing I'll do the next morning is find the other survivers to work together with. Tom was surprised how he hadn't blacked out and collapsed asleep yet. Now think about nothing! Tom fell asleep on some grass... it wasn't easy seeing as useless thoughts kept running through his head. He planned to go screaming the next morning.

((Jeez... :sleeping: ))
 
Zeth was in the middle of the ocean, and some sharks were swimming about. Their fangs ready for a feeding frenzy, they all bit him, one by one. They didn't finish him off, they just tore at his body, piece by piece.... He tried to scream, but nothing came out, all he could do was watch in terror as the sharks started to go crazy at the blood that was coming out of him, at the feast they were about to enjoy...

Zeth woke up, covered in cold sweat. It had only been a nightmare, but it felt so real. He felt chills going up his back, and didn't know what to do. He looked around and still saw nothing. He got up, and saw some stuff had washed up ahore. He picked up a suitcase, opned it, and discovered nothing very important, just some wet papers and things like that. His throat was ever so dry, he needed water. That's when he noticed a small pond by one of the palm trees. The water was crystal clear, and tasted so sweet. He drank until he was full, and then got up, hopig to find someone. His hair covered his eyes again.

~DragonTrainer:dragonite
 
Kayleigh sighed and began to walk off, examining the area closely. She tried so hard not to cry; all of her thoughts were so depressing. She continued walking along the beach, calling out her friend's names, hoping to get a response.
I'm getting so hungry, and thirsty... she thought, pausing and closing her eyes. She opened them and glanced over to notice a tall palm tree nearby.
If I can climb that, I might get a better view of the area.
She slowly walked towards it, stumbling along the way, until she finally stood in front of it.
Okay... she thought, grasping part of the bark and pulling herself up. Her shoes kept slipping, but she kept trying.
These stupid shoes! She kicked them off of her feet in a frustrated manner, and continued climbing up.
She finally reached the top, after a few minutes of struggling.
"Okay..." she said to herself. She scanned the entire area, but still saw nothing.
"ANYONE?!" she called out, sighing. "Isn't anyone here...?"
 
The next morning. Light flooded into Tom's eyes as he was waking up. He suddenly remembered what he said last night. "Ah!!" He quickly got up. In an effort to try not to lose a second of the morning awake, he started running along the beach without bothering to change his cloth yet, and he left his suitcase behind locked up by where he slept. Okay... okay... he slowed down his pace a bit continued along the beach, he looked forward with hopeful eyes. Please... someone, appear! I wonder if those two girls who saw me on the plane made it to this island.

((Is this an volcano island?))
 
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