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Red's a better color imo. I think what this sprite needs to be finished is some work on the shading and maybe some smoothed out line work.OK. changed colours and removed the bubbles :) hope this is better :D
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For the lighting, why is the nose not as light as the top where it's much lighter? I imagine it should be getting as much light since it's on the top where the light would hit it.
For the line work, I can see the outline on the upper right side that it a straight 45 degree line which could be curved a little. The nose also looked quite angular. I might try experimenting a little trying to smooth that out. If you give yourself more room around the sprite (you're not even using a full 64x64 canvas) you might have an easier time changing things since you won't feel like you're getting too close to the edge.