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Snailvivor [Challenge 15]

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JohnnyMustang said:
Okay guys, I think made a little mistake here and I said so on skype. I'm gonna quote myself here so everyone can see it. Please be mindful of how the story can work out from what you write. Anyway

You're being redundant. The story has to go on, be developed from the purpose, not the intention of the antagonist, which in this case is a dragon and makes it even less possible to know its true intentions.
[6:07:54] Johnny: If we had left unsaid, the intention of the antagonist, we would've have more space to develop the story and make a much more interesting plot twist, later on the story.
[6:08:37] Johnny: It can still be done though, but since it's collaborative writing... We don't wanna lose track of the story
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That's exactly what I was thinking. We understand. There's a dragon. We need more meat. I don't wanna lose! ;-;
 
lol guess who's going on a holiday for the long weekend tomorrow and won't have much internet access gg

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Once upon a time there was a cow. The cow's name was Moolah, who had everything she wanted in life. She was an independent cow who didn't need no bull. One day, a goat named Rocky came down the nearby mountain to seek her advice. Rocky approached Moolah and asked, "What is your key to success?"
 
Wait so should we continue from desi's idea :/
 
I thought the dragon would turn out to be the midgets' sacred protector but oh well.
 
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Once upon a time there was a cow. The cow's name was Moolah, who had everything she wanted in life. She was an independent cow who didn't need no bull. One day, a goat named Rocky came down the nearby mountain to seek her advice. Rocky approached Moolah and asked, "What is your key to success?" Moolah turned to Rocky and replied, "What kind of success are you looking for?"
 
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Once upon a time, there was a town full of tiny midgets. Despite the fearsome dragon stalking them, they wouldn't stop working. They were proud creatures that took joy in working and advancing their civilization, so they refused to bow down to the evil dragon. But evil dragon wants to make them his slaves and make them work for him for eternity of their life. This atrocity had tainted the scenery, causing the once fertile lands to become barren and desolate.
 
There are still too many idea if you ask like how midget goes in journey to attain power or human came to their place to help them etc. etc. You just have to be creative.
 
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Once upon a time, there was a town full of tiny midgets. Despite the fearsome dragon stalking them, they wouldn't stop working. They were proud creatures that took joy in working and advancing their civilization, so they refused to bow down to the evil dragon. But evil dragon wants to make them his slaves and make them work for him for eternity of their life. This atrocity had tainted the scenery, causing the once fertile lands to become barren and desolate.
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They already tried everything to kill the dragon, swords, bows, spears not a single one of them worked.
 
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Once upon a time there was a cow. The cow's name was Moolah, who had everything she wanted in life. She was an independent cow who didn't need no bull. One day, a goat named Rocky came down the nearby mountain to seek her advice. Rocky approached Moolah and asked, "What is your key to success?" Moolah turned to Rocky and replied, "What kind of success are you looking for?" The goat used all his might to think of a really good answer, but found himself lost as to what he really wanted in life.​
 
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Collector Elwood said:
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Once upon a time there was a cow. The cow's name was Moolah, who had everything she wanted in life. She was an independent cow who didn't need no bull. One day, a goat named Rocky came down the nearby mountain to seek her advice. Rocky approached Moolah and asked, "What is your key to success?" Moolah turned to Rocky and replied, "What kind of success are you looking for?" The goat used all his might to think of a really good answer, but found himself lost as to what he really wanted in life.​
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Did you just do a full 180°?

BOOOOOOOOO!!!

Team Saltzen do you even know who the main character in your story is? Some of your members don't even seem to know your team's name lmao.
 
alexkaz61 said:
Did you just do a full 180°?

BOOOOOOOOO!!!

Team Saltzen do you even know who the main character in your story is? Some of your members don't even seem to know your team's name lmao.
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Hey alexkaz61, welcome to the Underground! Cool to see you getting involved but this game has already started - if you're looking to start your first game, a beginners one should be up soon (: It would be a good level for you to get used to things and to play with players of a similar skill
level! And then in the future you can play these games ^___^

edit: Oh awkward I totally didn't realise you're playing this game! Nice to meet you, I'm Josh!
 
alexkaz61 said:
Did you just do a full 180°?
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There is such a thing as "keeping intrigue" and taking unusual turns to make the story interesting and challenge other members of my team, but I suppose a talentless hack like yourself wouldn't understand; so I apologize if it confused you.

Oh, and thanks for pointing that the team name was misspelled! It appears that you still got many skills despite your stunted evolutionary state. :)​
 
Collector Elwood said:

Oh, and thanks for pointing that the team name was misspelled! It appears that you still got many skills despite your stunted evolutionary state. :)​
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You haven't even seen my final form!
 
Once upon a time, there was a town full of tiny midgets. Despite the fearsome dragon stalking them, they wouldn't stop working. They were proud creatures that took joy in working and advancing their civilization, so they refused to bow down to the evil dragon. But evil dragon wants to make them his slaves and make them work for him for eternity of their life. This atrocity had tainted the scenery, causing the once fertile lands to become barren and desolate. They already tried everything to kill the dragon, swords, bows, spears not a single one of them worked. Due to their desire to protect their civilization from the dragon, they began crafting new tools and new weaponry at a rate faster than other neighboring races.
 
Team Escargot

Once upon a time, there was a town full of tiny midgets. Despite the fearsome dragon stalking them, they wouldn't stop working. They were proud creatures that took joy in working and advancing their civilization, so they refused to bow down to the evil dragon. But evil dragon wants to make them his slaves and make them work for him for eternity of their life. This atrocity had tainted the scenery, causing the once fertile lands to become barren and desolate. They already tried everything to kill the dragon, swords, bows, spears not a single one of them worked. Due to their desire to protect their civilization from the dragon, they began crafting new tools and new weaponry at a rate faster than other neighboring races. One day, one of the midgets discovered something amazing.


EDIT: POST #150 WOOOOO
 
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Once upon a time there was a cow. The cow's name was Moolah, who had everything she wanted in life. She was an independent cow who didn't need no bull. One day, a goat named Rocky came down the nearby mountain to seek her advice. Rocky approached Moolah and asked, "What is your key to success?" Moolah turned to Rocky and replied, "What kind of success are you looking for?" The goat used all his might to think of a really good answer, but found himself lost as to what he really wanted in life.

Moolah, sensing Rocky's indecision, offered to give the goat a new purpose in life.
 
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Hibikaze said:
*pokes*
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Once upon a time, there was a town full of tiny midgets. Despite the fearsome dragon stalking them, they wouldn't stop working. They were proud creatures that took joy in working and advancing their civilization, so they refused to bow down to the evil dragon. But evil dragon wants to make them his slaves and make them work for him for eternity of their life. This atrocity had tainted the scenery, causing the once fertile lands to become barren and desolate. They already tried everything to kill the dragon, swords, bows, spears not a single one of them worked. Due to their desire to protect their civilization from the dragon, they began crafting new tools and new weaponry at a rate faster than other neighboring races. One day, one of the midgets discovered something amazing. It was a fresh, shiny piece of cheese at the size of your average bungalow!


I felt like the story could use more cheese. :)
 
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